Today I introduce you to two extraordinary poets. I am happy to announce that Plum Tree Books will be publishing them both in the near future.The first is Dublin born Alan Patrick Traynor. Patrick sets the page alight! He is a brave, sizzling voice, writing as though possessed. I wonder that he is an elemental. I am excited to have discovered him for the Plum Tree. He will follow in the long line of Irish poets that have made their mark on the world. Unconventional, thumbing his nose at the Irish intelligentsia, the snooty, conservative, fear-filled nay-sayers that have never known how to take risks with genius. They forced most of the great Irish artists, poets and writers to leave Erin’s shores, Those who stay in Ireland rest unpeacefully in an in-between world along with the Tuatha De Danann. Alan is unafraid to disarrange syntax and break up the narrative. He is not afraid to shock, as he deconstructs the language and abuses the metaphor by making it stand on its head to plant an image that will stick in your mind and haunt you. Alan is a soaring talent!
The second of my poets today is Algerian born Imen Benyoub. Imen’s poetry is passionate, feeling, saturated with humanity ~ She speaks her feminine, flowing counterpoint to Alan’s blazing comet scrivenings. They have written a duet!
Water
My mother’s womb
The fathomless thorns
The flower of my abyss
Sky
On my back
Rests the raw cut grass
On my back I ponder killing the swallow
Wind
Oh bells be still
Through the highest tree be still
The feracious face of God
Sun
Kahlo’s face
And the nest of sparrows
That twisted the glorious wool into her neck
Moon
Silent is the orange sky
So we milk the blood of cactus
Into the grapefruit of morning—that is your lips
Stars
You fall into them
Through Van Gogh
Then deaf you become
Light
The blind know it by night
I am but that
Fire
Rain
When I was young
I would sit on the dry patch
That is what I have become
Marble
I have swallowed the dust
Worn its edges
Moses was that face when God spoke
Wounds
Revealed was the dog’s hanging
The other murdered in front of me
And the rabbits that hang on the nails of my heart
Poet
The broken hands of my heart
The swollen ink of my soul
I am both
Time
The movement of flowers
Clockwise to the sun
How the unrequited daffodils stand waiting
Language
You are the gothic rain
The unwoven
That black raincoat you soak in
© May 30th 2013)
Water
I scratch its surface with my fingers
Disturb its sleeping memory
Then Sculpt mirrors from it
Sky
I build it with sheets of silk
And strings of a broken violin
Then shape it into a dome
Wind
I play it in D Minor like a Russian piano concerto
I bend it, fold it
Knead it with bread
Sun
I hide it in my treasure box
Braid its rays to make a quilt
For the seasons of ice
Moon
My mother’s face
I shatter it to make lanterns
To strangers in blackout cities
Stars
I sow them
In my womb
They grow into fields of wheat
Rain
I make rosary beads from its drops
Carry it in my bags
To quench my thirst
Light
Is where the lotus blooms
I pour it in my dark grottos
Carve statues from it
Marble
I touch it, it groans
Its gray veins shrink and bleed
Fermented smoke
Wounds
Scented peonies in a garden’s fence
Broken church icons
I heal them to create a body
Time
The distance between two heartbeats
I crucify its suffering hours
Make an incision in its tissues
Language
Cocoons on my fingertips turning into butterflies
Ink leaks from my pores
Embroidery on white paper
Poet
A suspended star between dream and reality
A stray gazelle
In the forest of the alphabet
© 2013
Elements By Alan Patrick Traynor and Elements By Imen Benyoub
both were equally good and great poems…
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Yes! They are fantastic! I am looking forward to publishing both of these wonderful poets!
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Very kind of you! Poetry is our engine!
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My pleasure!
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I enjoyed the poems and the art.
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Many thanks Cassie for your visit and for your comment!
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Thank you Cassie, art is an autodidactic energy!
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Two wonderfully complementary pieces.
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Yes! They really are fantastic!
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Niamh you are Angel on earth! They are still here in you!
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Lol!
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Reblogged this on MacKENZIE's Dragonsnest and commented:
Two stunning poems by vibrant poets.
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From the master wordsmith 🙂
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Shawn will be delighted with that! Alan.
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Reblogged this on BUTTERFLIES OF TIME and commented:
Beautiful poems ! Alan and Imen are both so eloquent that the words jump out of the page with their energy and vibrancy.
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many thanks Reena! They are both fantastic!
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Such a beautiful comment 🙂 Alan
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Reena has a poet’s soul also!
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You are right, Patrick writes as if he is possessed. Very unique and full of depth. Imen’s poem is an interesting balance of flowing rhymn. Both beautiful.
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Many thanks for your comment, Patricia.
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Poetry is the ether come down upon us! So kind of you Patricia 🙂 Alan Patrick
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absolutely riveting stuff alan and imen
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I think so too! Ampat!
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Words from the poet skillful 🙂
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How very cool! And interesting!
Both of them – Alan & Imen,
you two had me dodging and weaving
as the arrows came flinging
at my eyes and my mind, as my heart
attempted to put 1 and 1 back together.
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Uncle tree, thank you for a comment that weaves into the page 🙂
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Alan and Imen, my mind ripples off the energy and echoing of your words. Touching the reverb. Shattering the senses. You carve the words so the jagged edges cut the waves of thought. Knocking out the path toward that less traveled. Great poems. Contemplation necessary. Abstraction receptors activated. Thank you Niamh for calling forth the poetry of Alan and Imen. You shattered the world in an effort to return it to its’ true nature. A moving effort of brilliance. Jk
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Great comment, Jennifer! many thanks. I think in these two poets, we are returning to the real ~ to what poetry is all about!
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I like how they talk about similar topics in different ways.
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Yes! A mirror poem Erik! Thank you.
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Thank you so much for publishing the poetry of Alan & Imen…and all you other work as well..
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You are very welcome, Jim! I like to diversify!
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thank you so much Niamh you’re such a beautiful soul, thank you Alan,for being a wonderful partner and a friend,and for all of those who read our poetry thank you for your lovely,encouraging comments,am so humbled..and honored to be part of Plum tree..hope more beautiful collaborations like this will come soon
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